Evaluation -- Step 6 

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Visitor's Survey Paper evaluation 6 trait rubric
Weekly evaluations Oral evaluations Rubric slide show
Evaluating sources
National Judging Criteria
State Core Objectives

The highest level of critical thinking involves evaluation.  Students should be encouraged to use this critical thinking skill throughout the research process.  Some possible ways to include this strategy: Students write Weekly evaluations of their own research, evaluation of sources, evaluation of oral presentations, and evaluation of their own writing, and that of their peers through the use of 6 trait rubric.  (Review these traits via slide show.

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Weekly Evaluations

E-mail your teacher each weekend, evaluating what you accomplished each week during the research unit. Type your name and  the date you send each evaluation at the top and keep a print out for your records.  These responses will count approximately 5% of your total grade on this unit.  Each evaluation should be about 150-300 words long and answer at least 4-7 of the following questions.
                        Some possible areas you can evaluate:
                        1.  What new knowledge did you obtain this week?
                        2.  What things do you have a better understanding of?
                        3.  What else do you need to study to comprehend better?
                        4.  In what ways did you use application skills?
                        5.  Ways in which you used analysis?
                        6.  Synthesis skills used?
                        7.  Approximate time spent this week on researching?
                        8.  What problem solving skills did you use, and what was the outcome?
                        9.  What are the main problems you still need to solve?
                        10.  What additional help, or sources do you need?  Where will you find them?
                        11.  How would you rate your effectiveness this week, and why?

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Evaluating Sources:

    Part of higher thinking in the research process involves step 4 of Bloom's taxonomy -- Analysis.  There is such a glut of information today, that students must learn to analyze and evaluate sources carefully before they begin taking notes. There is a section on this on the I-Search CD.) Here are some of the things they should ask:

                               1.   Find out if information is current (especially if it is a scientific topic),
                               2.   Make sure information is relevant and reliable.
                               3.   Determine if the information is balanced.
                               4.   Determine if the author is credible.
                               5.   See if information is  well supported, and documented.
                               6.   Recognize information that contains propaganda or bias.
                               7.   Recognize information that is opinion rather than fact.
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Judging Criteria
The most important aspect of an entry is its historical quality, which determines 60% of the total evaluation. The  judges' evaluation will rest on the students' success at conducting historical research, interpreting their research, and drawing conclusions. A superior rating generally reflects positive responses to the following questions:
  • Is the entry historically accurate?
  • Does the entry provide analysis and interpretation of the historical data in addition to an accurate description? The entry should not simply recount facts but interpret them.
  • Does the entry demonstrate an understanding of the historical context – the intellectual, physical, social, and cultural setting?
  • Does the entry reflect historical perspective – the causes and consequences of an event, for example, or the relationship of a local topic to larger events?
  • Does the annotated bibliography demonstrate solid research?
  • Does the entry demonstrate a balanced presentation of materials?
  • Does the entry use a variety of viewpoints (e.g., those who suffered as well as those who benefited, males, females, people from different racial or ethnic socio- economic groups, as appropriate to the topic)?
  • Does the entry demonstrate the use of available primary sources and secondary sources?
  • Clarity of Presentation
    Although historical quality is most important, entries must be  presented in an effective manner. This section is worth 20% of the total evaluation. Do not be carried away by glitz; simpler is often –but not always -- better. The following questions will be considered by judges when looking at clarity of presentation:
  • Is the entry original, creative, well organized, and imaginative in subject and presentation?
  • Is the entry effective in communicating the significance of the topic?
  • Is the written material clear, grammatical, and correctly spelled?
  • In exhibits, are the title, sectional divisions, and main points easy to discern?
  • Are photographs and images appropriate in terms of content and location?
  • Is the overall project pleasing to the eye?
  • In a documentary or performance, is the script clear?  I
  • In a performance, do the students display stage presence?
  • Is the visual material clear and appropriate for the type of entry?
  • Do the students display adequate familiarity with their equipment?
  • Adherence to Theme
    The entry must clearly explain the relation of the topic to the annual National History Day theme. This section is worth 20% of the total evaluation. The topic should be placed in historical context, and the entry must demonstrate the student's understanding of the significance of the topic in history. The entry should not confuse fame with significance. In other words, the entry should answer the questions, "So what? Why was this important?" It should not be just descriptive. The relationship of the entry's topic to the yearly theme should be explicit and should be integrated into the entry itself.

    Evaluation forms for judging entries


     

    Evaluation of writing using 6 trait rubric
    For instruction go to slide show






    6 Trait Editing Checklist

    Read your paper and analyze it.  Determine which of these traits you have successfully incorporated.  Which ones do you need to work on?

    Ideas and Content

    Organization
  •  My paper has a main idea.
  •  Paragraphs only talk about one thing.
  •  My paper has a strong beginning.
  •  My ending is well thought out.
  •  My paper doesn't jump around. It is easy to follow.
  •  Topic sentences tell about each paragraph.
  • Voice
  • This paper sounds like me.
  •  This paper shows I care about the topic.
  •  This paper is lively, or exciting in some way, or it is a little different from everyone else's.
  • Word Choice
  •  I chose accurate, strong, specific words.
  •  My words are fun to read.
  •  I tried something new with my words
  • Sentence Fluency
  •  Sentences are smooth and easy to read.
  •  I fixed my choppy sentences. (Read aloud to determine this.)
  • Sentences start in different ways.
  •  I have some long sentences and some short sentences to make my paper interesting.
  •  Each sentence has a noun and a verb.
  • Conventions
  • I checked my spelling.
  • I checked my capitals, periods, and indents.
  • I gave each speaker a new paragraph.

  • I put quotation marks ''  '' around things that others said.

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    Rubric for Oral presentations
    As a wrap up to the research unit, and to meet State Core requirements for oral language skills, it is suggested the students be given the opportunity to present their research findings to the class.  Here is a sample rubric for this task.

    Evaluator: ________________________________________

    Presenter:________________________________________

    Rate each category from 1-5 (1 = unprepared; 2 = fair; 3 = average;
    4 = good; 5 = Excellent)   Be objective, and at the end of each evaluation, add two specific comments or suggestions.

     
    Spoke clearly and confidently    1   2   3   4   5
    Seemed to know a lot about the topic           
    Information was clearly explained; discussed 2-3 main ideas          
    Explained where information was found          
    Told how topic supported thesis          
    Gave good response to class questions          


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    Sample scoring sheet for final draft of Historical Paper
    Name______________________________________    Due Date____________
                       GRAND TOTAL_____________/360
     HISTORY RESEARCH PAPER EVALUATION
    Check off each activity as you complete it :      (Do NOT bind this sheet in a folder)
    CHECK                                                     POOR  FAIR  GOOD  EXCEL
     I.  FORMAT AND COMPONENTS
    _______ *A.  THIRD draft w/ revisions                   5    6    8   10
    _______  B.  Grammatik checked                          5    6    8   10
    _______  C. Cover sheet w/ all info                        5    6    8   10
    _______  D.  Parallel outline with thesis and title 10  15  17  20
    _______  E.  Documentation is complete             10  15  17  20
    _______  F.  Annotated source list                         15  20  25  30
              uses wide variety of primary & secondary sources
    _______  G.  Neatly typed, w/ illustrations               5     7    8  10
    _______  H.  Utilizes interview information             0   10   15  20
    _______  I.  Captivating title                                      5     6     8  10
    _______  J.  Parent verification signed                   0
                                                                Total_______________
    150
    II CONTENT OF PAPER
    ______ A.  Has an interesting intro                        10  15  17   20
    ______ B.  Clearly states the thesis                         5     7    8   10
       and reinforces it in paper
    ______ C.  Writing is original, creative                   10  15  17   20
       imaginative, interesting
    ______ D.  Author demonstrates understanding    25  30  35   40
      of subject/ shows relationship between theme and history
    ______ E.  Has a strong conclusion                         10  16  18  20
    ______ F.  Paper shows balance                                5    7   8  10
          (a variety of views and sources)
    ______ G.  Writer analyzes and                                 10  15  17 20
         interprets the research
             Total--------------
                140
    III TECHNICAL QUALITIES
    ______ A.  Parallel outline followed                    5    6    8    10
    ______ B.  Uses correct grammar, diction      10  15 17   20
    ______ C.  Uses correct punctuation,               10   15 17   20
                         spelling
    ______ D.  Uses strong transitions                   10   15 17    20
    Comments:
             Total______________
                     70 ==============================================================
    Parent signature:   I verify that the writing for this paper was done by _____________________. My contribution was to _____________________________________________________________
    Signature:___________________________________  Date______________
       

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    UTAH STATE CORE OBJECTIVES:
    Students will evaluate the process and the product.
            6512-0601
  • Judge the process for efficiency and effectiveness.
  •  Reflect upon personal information problem-solving skills (the Big Six©) as a means of ongoing self-evaluation throughout the assignment.
  • Develop and complete a checklist.
  • Keep a journal.
  • Assess learning style(s).
  • Solicit and reflect upon peer reviews and teacher comments about process performance.
  • Conference with peers and teachers.
  • Read and respond to written evaluation from peers and teachers.
  •         6512-0602
  • Judge the product for effectiveness.
  •  Reflect on level of personal satisfaction.
  • Compare product with criteria from the original task definition.
  • Solicit and reflect upon peer reviews and teacher comments about the product.
  • Conference with peers and teachers.
  • Read and respond to written evaluation from peers and teachers.
  • 6512-0603
  • Judge use of time in the library media center.
  • Evaluate use of on-task time for personal satisfaction and intellectual and aesthetic growth.
  • Evaluate use of leisure time for personal satisfaction and intellectual and aesthetic growth.
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